Your eyes
A gypsy's crystal ball
My universe held unfurled within them
I look and I am flying in the orbit,
Into unknown space, meteorites are flying by.
The stars stare at me like a thousand twinkling eyes
But in this vast stellar field one star casts an inescapable cosmic hook-on me
The one that looked at me with her eyes
Her eyes, My northern star
Hey Bianca. I really like this whole blog thing so I decided to make myself a page lol. And I wanted to comment on my favorite piece of yours so far.. I hope you write more. Talk to you soon.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I enjoy your writing as well. I sometimes get comments that the shorter pieces as "koan-ish" (I'll make an effort to post more of them.) I dont know how much of that is true. Do feel free to leave points for improvement. Though we draw from life in the end I find artful comment very helpful to make things more artisticaly palatable. :-)
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